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Me talking:

Sometimes I wonder
But never really know just what about

Well I wonder alot let's put it that way
I wonder abotu surtain things
like if I deied
who would cry?

I've always wondered that
never knowing why
There's things I wonder about
but for now I'll have to go
I'll move on
Never really paying
attetion to the ones who care

ok now this is what Lacey said:

If you died,
I would cry,
my heart would break
again,
WHy would you want to die?
I care,
and love you,
my friend,
stay alive,
live with me
©2003-2009 ~charmprincess
:iconcharmprincess:

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ok I was really down and as always my friend lacey had to cheer me up so here is the two poems they kinda go togther

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:iconleolekia:
very interesting piece and i can relate to the feelings. but life is good, so many good people, so much good food :). Nice job.

~Leo
:iconprincepoo:
all the spelling errors take away from reading it as a whole, but it is very nice. heartfelt emotions are the ones that make the best poetry.
:iconnarcotics:
Wow, you both talk to each other in a very poetic way. I've wondered the same thing you have, and this piece is very emotional. It potrays kindness and love and friendship. Only thing to change: fix spelling/punctuation errors.
:iconcorruptedangel:
Nice relationship bu I'm afraid to say you obviously have a problem with spelling! learn to proof read! lol.
:iconrangarig-dragon:
Hmm depressing thoughts. Kind answer of you friend! Very kind answer! :) Hope you are Ok now. If not - cheer up!! :hug:
:iconkevinfrancis:
very poetic i must say
:iconguttergirl11:
I like it I've never sceen a poem written in that style I really like it! Maybe I'll try sometime!
~nikki~
:icondafamily:
wow ur poems is great haslotsof feeling n al ot can relate keep it up :-)

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